chocolate

mouthful of chocolate
fills her cheeks, stretches her throat
smothered in the taste

~ by drawnblind on April 24, 2007.

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11 Responses to “chocolate”

  1. “mouthful of chocolate” = 6 syllables so this is not a haiku

    Anonymous said this on April 25, 2007 at 1:28 pm

  2. “chok-lat.” Ease up.

    Anonymous said this on April 25, 2007 at 8:30 pm

  3. The haikus are nice, but there’s a picture of a blowjob, and someone is sitting back and counting syllables? WTF?

    Are you a jealous unemployed poet or something?

    Anonymous said this on April 26, 2007 at 11:45 am

  4. wow, hot! source plz?

    Anonymous said this on April 26, 2007 at 9:51 pm

  5. I would like to know the source as well… cute girl.

    Anonymous said this on April 26, 2007 at 9:52 pm

  6. No I’m no poet, but if the blog is about blowjobs AND haiku poetry, then the structure should be 5-7-5. Simple as that.

    If it’s not 5-7-5 then wtf is the point? Just post the pic of the bitch chugging cock and be done with it if the structure is not 5-7-5. That’s all.

    Anonymous said this on April 29, 2007 at 2:09 am

  7. get a life faggot

    Anonymous said this on April 29, 2007 at 9:35 am

  8. Faggots usually look at pictures of dicks don’t they? I’m mostly concerned with the structure of the Haiku – which has been inconsistent at best!

    Anonymous said this on April 29, 2007 at 11:50 pm

  9. mouthful of chocolate is 5 syllables. fucking idiots.

    Anonymous said this on May 9, 2007 at 3:53 am

  10. Anyone know where I can find more of this girl?

    Anonymous said this on May 9, 2007 at 1:28 pm

  11. that cock looks delicious

    Anonymous said this on July 6, 2007 at 11:54 am

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